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VaughnWG	Sonic the Hedgehog: Genesis (Fan Comic, Rated 18+ for Language and Blood)	Lead	[-]
Posts: 1 (05/20/2009 6:36 AM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	A fan comic with a slightly darker tone from the games and Archie Comics versions, introducing alternate character roles, redesigns, and characters made specifically made for the comic. Hope you like it, enjoy ^^ -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sonic the Hedgehog and others from the series (c) SEGA Archie-Sonic characters (c) Archie Comics Non-Sonic characters (c) David Anderson ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Episode 1 Episode 2 Episode 3 Episode 4 Episode 5 Last Edited By: VaughnWG 05/21/2009 1:22 AM. Edited 3 times.
Samanfur the Fox		#1	[-]
Posts: 18558 (05/20/2009 12:13 PM) Swords `n` Sorcery Fan & Occasional Forlorn Voice of Sanity Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	It's an intriguing story and I very much like the detail level of your art (which obviously takes a great deal of dedication and reminds me of early Other-M), but I think that you're misrepresenting it in calling it a re-telling of what we already know about Sonic and friends. In that respect, I didn't expect your original character rather than Sonic to consistently be the main focus from the first scene onwards, and Sonic to either have to be constantly seen in relation to her or from her perspective, or used for exposition of how special she is. Sonic isn't the focus here. I'm not trying to criticise because it's your story to tell and nobody else's, and I'm interested in where it's going. But I'd be careful how you describe it, because so far this AU isn't about Sonic at all. We haven't actually seen him do anything. No longer a forum staff member. Please do not contact me if you need a Mod or Admin.
VaughnWG		#2	[-]
Posts: 2 (05/21/2009 1:21 AM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Okay, thank you for the advice. I'll restate my description of the comic since Ballad does seem to get slightly more screen time than Sonic. In terms of what I meant by retelling, not all of the characters share the same backgrounds as their comic/game counter parts such as "Bunnie Rabbot" working with Robotnik and Scratch being lethal. But I do understand what you've said and I'll keep it in mind for the next comics I make. Thanks again ^^
Samanfur the Fox		#3	[-]
Posts: 18560 (05/22/2009 4:22 AM) Swords `n` Sorcery Fan & Occasional Forlorn Voice of Sanity Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Thanks for understanding. I knew what you meant and I like the idea of different origins and plotlines for the canon cast members - I've seen it done before and I'm always curious about what each individual writer wants to do (especially when it comes to things like making Scratch and Grounder serious threats ). Again, it reminds me of an early Ian Flynn fan project, and I'm interested in seeing your ake on it. No longer a forum staff member. Please do not contact me if you need a Mod or Admin.
VaughnWG		#4	[-]
Posts: 5 (05/22/2009 6:19 AM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	^^ I do my best. Just as the people that come to this site, I'm a big Sonic fan and have been since both the first game and the first cartoon way back when. In fact, I don't even know what got me into Sonic in the first place, all I remember is constantly watching,playing, and reading Sonic stuff. I will point the story more towards Sonic as most things involve him more then Ballad, but getting to know her is very important to the story as well so I've make sure to balance things out as well as getting the other characters in. Thanks again for your input^^
John Taylor		#5	[-]
Posts: 2641 (05/22/2009 7:10 AM) If I was in World War 2, They'd call me Spitfire. Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	I'll be honest, I'm not sure about some of the character re-design's (particularly Rouge and Vanilla). And the original character seems to be dominating so far. But it seems to be building into something good. [url]http://profile.mygamercard.net/JohnBoyAdvance[/url] [img]http://card.mygamercard.net/JohnBoyAdvance.png[/img]
VaughnWG		#6	[-]
Posts: 7 (05/22/2009 11:12 AM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Yes I admit my way is a little...revealing... I usually draw things along the lines of having it aimed towards older people and the same goes for this. These are my original characters that I draw for a web-comic I'm doing called "World Gates" http://foxclawwg.deviantart.com/gallery/#WG-Characters and some of them are more mature than others. Nudity usually appears in World Gates, but I don't plan on showing stuff like that in the Sonic comic as far as actually seeing breasts or private areas. But characters like Sally and Sonic who hardly wear clothes to begin with will remain that way. Thanks for your input though and I'll work on Ballad more.
Veckums		#7	[-]
Posts: 1531 (05/22/2009 8:08 PM) A drunken sandwich Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	The badniks look cool, especially the armadillo bot on the cover. The designs of the female characters are, umm, err, how do I say this? Ditch the eyeshadow to start with. It always looked silly with Rouge and Bunnie, and due to the way you shade it in B&W it's even more extreme here. Rouge and Vanilla in particular are disturbing. I kind of like how you started of with Sonic being defeated to get the rivalry going. Robotnik could use a better reason for letting him go though. shakespeare gets so tired of time travellers telling him not to listen to his mp3s because of all the anachronism he's causing. shakespeare just wants to ROCK!
VaughnWG		#8	[-]
Posts: 8 (05/23/2009 1:50 AM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Thanks for commenting. I can try to lighting up on the eyeshadow, but characters like Vanilla who has a fur color change around her eyes needs it. If there anything else that I could try to fix, feel free to let me know ^^
HyperSonic2003		#9	[-]
Posts: 5945 (05/27/2009 3:05 PM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Whoa! Heck yea! This is awesome! I lve the little side notes. full of himself But Tails...umm WHAT! The poor fox boy. I love how alot of the characters from various universes are being thrown into the mix. Very nice, my friend. And dang...Robotnik packs a punch/slap, huh? He's no joke. xD! Oh...before I forget. Your artwork! AHH! Incredible. So wish I could draw like that. All I can do are dragons/alligators. LOL! Very, very talented indeed. Give me more, give me more! With his killer kicks this "master" will put you in your place.
VaughnWG		#10	[-]
Posts: 10 (05/27/2009 3:22 PM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Lol thanks, and so you're not confused, that wasn't Tails in episode 1 it was just a BG character. Tails will appear later on. A picture of him can be found here http://sonichqcommunity.yuku.com/topic/8957
HyperSonic2003		#11	[-]
Posts: 5954 (05/27/2009 11:07 PM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	has another looksie Indeed...definitely not Tails. Thanks for that link, though. So totally should've check that out first. Silly, me. lol With his killer kicks this "master" will put you in your place.
Beugy		#12	[-]
Posts: 1312 (05/28/2009 12:50 PM) "Easily Traumatized 5-Year-Old" Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	I usually don't care much for fan-fiction, but I'm starting to like where this is going. Keep up the good work. My fellow Americans... In G.I.G.G.I.T.Y. we trust. ~ Bill Clinton ...supposedly after getting his ass handed to him by hot ninja chicks
Toby Underwood		#13	[-]
Posts: 2396 (06/04/2009 12:49 AM) RP Mod Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Main character seems a little overdeveloped. As if she's already been through her trials and is at the end of her metaphoric journey. By that I mean ready to face whoever it is her nemesis is. That's not a BAD thing mind you, just that I'd rather see how she got to this point. THEN watch her wreak havoc on the baddies like a hell-borne phoenix. :3 End of the day though, one of the better piece of fanwork I've seen for a long while, man. The fact I'm posting somewhere aside from the RP Guild should testify to that. It's not often one person can draw AND construct a storyline with any semblance of plot development. Well done my friend. bow ~Tobe
VaughnWG		#14	[-]
Posts: 14 (06/05/2009 3:55 AM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Thank you for the kind words. I am reworking Ballad a bit more so she isn't taking too much of the spotlight instead of Sonic. I should have a new comic next week
VaughnWG		#15	[-]
Posts: 16 (06/23/2009 3:28 AM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Episode 6
Crimson Darkwolfe		#16	[-]
Posts: 4562 (06/23/2009 11:42 AM) Permanant Newbie Lord Hotboxers Fluffing Toby's Space Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	This aint half bad. grabs popcorn I'd give more in depth comments, but right now I'm too nakered, so I shall simply say I'll be watching where this goes.
VaughnWG		#17	[-]
Posts: 17 (06/23/2009 2:58 PM) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	lol thanks
Rishi		#18	[-]
Posts: 3299 (07/02/2009 12:05 AM) JJ's secret squeezer Homofur Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Awesome work. Keep it up!
LWSrocks		#19	[-]
Posts: 431 (07/29/2009 9:00 AM) Does NOT smell like socks Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Wot!? Scratch isn't a nerd!? Check out The Sonic Challenge... My newest fic! Read it at www.sonicchallenge.piczo.com, or at The Sonic Challenge thread in Carnival Island!